This story was really sober and down-to-earth yet still heartfelt, which is an unusual but very appreciated treatment of sexual subjects (and I love that Emma has her phone in the bathroom). I hope the two of them can find ways to connect emotionally in the future. I'd definitely be keen to see more of their story.
I love the art style and expression work as well. Having the splashing sounds as occasional background noise really worked with the atmosphere. I think having more music than that would have detracted from the quiet atmosphere.
My only criticism would be that the font on the menu is a little hard to read, but I still managed to navigate without issues.
(edited because I forgot like half of what I wanted to say)
aw, thank you so, so much for your words! i really appreciate you. i'll be continuing their story soon, i'm glad you're interested in them ☺️ along with that is probably an update with some fixes and polishing too, i'll keep your criticism in mind! again, thank you very much for playing! :DD ( and sorry for the late reply :') )
hi, thank you so much, i really appreciate that! :DD about the extras tab, you should be able to access it after you finished the story. could you try downloading the game again? i'm so sorry for the inconvenience! :'((
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This story was really sober and down-to-earth yet still heartfelt, which is an unusual but very appreciated treatment of sexual subjects (and I love that Emma has her phone in the bathroom). I hope the two of them can find ways to connect emotionally in the future. I'd definitely be keen to see more of their story.
I love the art style and expression work as well. Having the splashing sounds as occasional background noise really worked with the atmosphere. I think having more music than that would have detracted from the quiet atmosphere.
My only criticism would be that the font on the menu is a little hard to read, but I still managed to navigate without issues.
(edited because I forgot like half of what I wanted to say)
aw, thank you so, so much for your words! i really appreciate you. i'll be continuing their story soon, i'm glad you're interested in them ☺️ along with that is probably an update with some fixes and polishing too, i'll keep your criticism in mind! again, thank you very much for playing! :DD ( and sorry for the late reply :') )
Lovely little experience and gorgeous artwork! Is there a way to unlock the Extras tab?
hi, thank you so much, i really appreciate that! :DD about the extras tab, you should be able to access it after you finished the story. could you try downloading the game again? i'm so sorry for the inconvenience! :'((
It works now, good stuff! :) I'd be interested in seeing a future update with voice acting eventually!
By the way- what movie character is Tyler based off of?
I'm glad! I'm happy you're interested :') Tyler is based off of Tyler Durden from Fight Club, but less insane and a bit more empathetic.
this is really cozy! and your art is really pretty, thank you for the experience!
i'm happy you liked it! :DD thank you very much as well! <33